Friday, May 2,
2008 – Beginning at the End
As I scrambled to finish my new young adult
manuscript before my next critique group meeting, I felt like I was a little
lost. I thought it was because I could write these certain scenes because I
didn’t have all the information I needed from the police officers and the
juvenile court judge. But as I tried to write around these scenes I still wasn’t
feeling particularly directed.
I decided to try something my friend and
mentor has done for years—write the ending first. I used to think she was crazy—wasn’t
that like eating dessert first? The ending was my favorite part; I wanted to
savor it, treat myself to it after working hard over 200-300 pages in a
manuscript.
But I decided to try it because I wasn’t sure
what I was doing after a big turning point in the book. And it was amazing! I
wrote and rewrote the ending scene, which expanded into the last chapter.
Suddenly I had all this clarity about where the earlier chapters should go and
how I needed to shape certain relationships and events. So, of course, Julie is
trying not to say “I told you so.” But go ahead and say it, I don’t care. I’m
just thrilled the book is chugging along again!
I also tried her method of writing random
scenes and putting them together. This was mainly because I was at the Pikes
Peak Writers Conference last weekend and had brought my Dana AlphaSmart which is fantastic but doesn’t handle large
documents as well as smaller ones. So I gave up trying to work on my big novel
and wrote different scenes I knew I wanted in the book. It was a lot of fun and
got my juices flowing.
Yesterday I was sick so today I’m playing
catch up with my Blab, the Blab-o-Readers, and Erin’s blog. This weekend I
should be able to get back to the novel.
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Saturday,
April 19, 2008 – Websites & Writing
So it’s 75 degrees here in Denver today.
Beautiful sunny day but I can’t let it fool me. It was 80 on Tuesday and snowed
on Wednesday—that’s Colorado weather for you.
I’ve been spending a ton of time on my new website,
and I’ve also been working this week on getting my new Shout Out stuff going.
People can subscribe and receive a quarterly newsletter (starting in May) and
occasional announcements in between if something amazing happens that
absolutely cannot wait until the next newsletter issue—like maybe I’ve won the
Nobel Prize in Physics—right.
So that’s kept my sister and me very
busy—she’s my moderator and all-around assistant. I couldn’t do all this
“extra” stuff without her. She also took the photo of me that will appear on
the book jacket for Grandmother, Have the
Angels Come? Multi-talented woman.
My other fun thing was finishing the book
trailer for Fact of Life #31, which
comes out May 13. I created the trailer and then my bro-in-law, Wayne Applehans, wrote the “score”--original music that goes
perfectly with the visuals. Another multi-talented person in my family! They’re
everywhere, let me tell you, and it’s fantastic to be able to go to family for
help and have all these amazing things happen.
This week I also made some progress on the
Male POV book but I realized I have to change the name of his best friend. I
can’t use the name because I keep thinking of my son’s friend with the same
name and they aren’t the same people at all. So now I’m on the hunt for a new
name. It has to be one that can have a nickname—like Jon for Jonathan or Bill
for William. But not those, because I know people with those names too!
I also wrote a brand new picture book
manuscript last week and had two people in my online critique group review it
and give me feedback. Caroline Stutson and Marjorie Blain Parker are absolute
masters of the picture book, especially the rhyming picture book (as is Linda
Ashman, who is also local). If you want to learn the craft of writing a picture
book—get books by these authors! I made several changes to my manuscript based
on their feedback and then sent it to my agent. We’ll be talking about what
publisher to send it to when she has a chance to read it.
So, how proud am I that I’m writing here again
this month? Very, very proud. And I also added a new
entry for Erin’s blog. Three cheers for me.
TTFN
Sunday, April
6, 2008 – Inspiration
I’m what’s called a
Co-Regional Advisor for the Rocky Mountain Chapter of the Society of Children’s
Book Writers and Illustrators (RMC-SCBWI). We had our first Spring Workshop
yesterday at a new venue and it was really wonderful. I loved being surrounded
by so much talent and found it invigorating and inspiring. I did critiques with
five writers who were all amazing—not only as writers but also at giving
feedback, even though for some of them it was their first time to do such a
thing. Truly fab.
This week I will be working hard on my new
novel—we’ll refer to it as the MALE POV book until my publisher wants to
publish it and it has a title. I had a great time meeting with two of my
friends who are also Denver police officers because my character in this book
gets into a bit of trouble with the law. My meeting was very eye-opening with
regards to the juvenile justice system and just some of the kids who are going
through it. Wow.
Until next time…
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Wednesday,
April 2, 2008 – A New Leaf (I hope)
With the launch of my totally new and
improved website, I thought I’d better write at least one more entry.
Let’s see. I’m still working on that YA novel
from the boy’s POV and it’s going along really well. I’m having lots of fun
with the characters and the story. At the end of February I met with two
friends who are also Denver police officers because my character gets into a
bit of trouble with the law. They were fabulously helpful, as was a juvenile
court judge who responded to a series of questions I had. I’m very excited to
incorporate all of the stuff I learned about the Denver juvenile justice system
into my book.
Did you see the Blab-o-Readers page? I’m very
excited to FINALLY have something up from all of my very, very patient readers
who have written. If you haven’t had a chance to read some of their messages to
me and my replies, you should definitely check it out. I am going to try very,
very hard to respnd once a week to e-mails that come
in!
I’m also determined to write in this blab and
update Erin’s blog more frequently so let’s see if I can do it and still write
my books!
Laters…
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Friday, January 4, 2008—Happy New Year!
2007 was a very busy year, with three books coming out in 2008: FACT OF LIFE #31 in May, BUILD A BURRITO in the fall, and GRANDMOTHER, HAVE THE ANGELS COME? next winter. I'm also working on a brand-new young adult novel told from a boy's point of view, which has been really fun and challenging. I'm also teaching some writing workshops.
I wish everyone a fabulous and joyous new year!