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Post Prompt: Character Fears (part 1)

Posted by on September 18, 2012

Here is what I wrote from yesterday’s Jumpstart:

Sheridan’s fear: getting close to a guy

Sheridan turned, smacking right into Dominic.

“Oh, God, sorry.”

“My fault.” My whole body tensed. I backed away quickly, clutching my books to my chest, opening my mouth to breathe so I wouldn’t smell the mixture of soap, aftershave, toothpaste and boy smell that made up Dominic Amato.

“Do I smell that bad?” He smiled, cocking his head slightly.

No, I thought. You smell that good. And I don’t know what to do with that.

“Which way are you going?” He took a step toward her.

“I’m late,” I mumbled, then turned, hurrying away from him.

My character reacts to being physically close to a boy by freaking out because she was betrayed by someone she cared about the past spring. It was interesting how long it took me to actually identify a fear. She had several and most were so intertwined that I had to tease one out so I could use it.

I had fun writing this short scene and I think it’s going to find its way into the book!

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